code review 7696045: doc/go1.1.html: introduction

doc/go1.1.html: introduction

[r, 2013-03-25 21:36:19]

Hello golang-dev@googlegroups.com,

I'd like you to review this change to
https://code.google.com/p/go

[r, 2013-03-25 22:07:23]

Hello golang-dev@googlegroups.com (cc: golang-dev@googlegroups.com),

Please take another look.

[adg, 2013-03-25 22:14:23]

https://codereview.appspot.com/7696045/diff/3001/doc/go1.1.html
File doc/go1.1.html (right):

https://codereview.appspot.com/7696045/diff/3001/doc/go1.1.html#newcode10
doc/go1.1.html:10: When <a href="/doc/go1.html">Go version 1</a>, also known as
Go 1
the "also known as" is probably not worth it

https://codereview.appspot.com/7696045/diff/3001/doc/go1.1.html#newcode24
doc/go1.1.html:24: includes some major work on the implementation of the
compilers,
s/includes some/is/ ?

https://codereview.appspot.com/7696045/diff/3001/doc/go1.1.html#newcode35
doc/go1.1.html:35: although a couple of rare error cases are now caught by the
Go 1.1
should we call these out specifically in the intro? we shouldn't force users to
read the whole document just to see if they fall into the few minority cases

[bradfitz, 2013-03-25 22:16:58]

https://codereview.appspot.com/7696045/diff/3001/doc/go1.1.html
File doc/go1.1.html (right):

https://codereview.appspot.com/7696045/diff/3001/doc/go1.1.html#newcode10
doc/go1.1.html:10: When <a href="/doc/go1.html">Go version 1</a>, also known as
Go 1
could drop /doc/ if you wanted. same directory.

https://codereview.appspot.com/7696045/diff/3001/doc/go1.1.html#newcode14
doc/go1.1.html:14: and systems around the world.  Several "point" releases since
then:
"i'm trying to use one space after periods, breaking a lifelong habit"

https://codereview.appspot.com/7696045/diff/3001/doc/go1.1.html#newcode16
doc/go1.1.html:16: known bugs and avoided any non-critical changes to the
implementation.
I've stumbled over this this transition from "primarily to" into "avoided" a
couple times.

Maybe break it into two sentence:

...  have since been issued. The point releases fixed known bugs but avoided any
non-critical ...

https://codereview.appspot.com/7696045/diff/3001/doc/go1.1.html#newcode36
doc/go1.1.html:36: implementation so may need to be addressed if they arise. 
Details
two spaces

[r, 2013-03-26 00:34:58]

Hello golang-dev@googlegroups.com, adg@golang.org, bradfitz@golang.org (cc:
golang-dev@googlegroups.com),

Please take another look.

[adg, 2013-03-26 00:38:56]

LGTM

https://codereview.appspot.com/7696045/diff/9001/doc/go1.1.html
File doc/go1.1.html (right):

https://codereview.appspot.com/7696045/diff/9001/doc/go1.1.html#newcode41
doc/go1.1.html:41: <a href="#int">64-bit ints</a> and <a
href="unicode_literals">Unicode literals</a>
missing # before unicode_literals

[r, 2013-03-26 00:41:15]

*** Submitted as https://code.google.com/p/go/source/detail?r=84c4b83085d1 ***

doc/go1.1.html: introduction

R=golang-dev, adg, bradfitz
CC=golang-dev
https://codereview.appspot.com/7696045