code review 7454044: doc/effective_go.html: minor updates, part 1

doc/effective_go.html: minor updates, part 1

[r, 2013-02-28 22:18:13]

Hello golang-dev@googlegroups.com,

I'd like you to review this change to
https://code.google.com/p/go

[adg, 2013-03-01 00:19:39]

https://codereview.appspot.com/7454044/diff/1/doc/effective_go.html
File doc/effective_go.html (right):

https://codereview.appspot.com/7454044/diff/1/doc/effective_go.html#newcode48
doc/effective_go.html:48: on the word "Example" by to open it up).
s/by //

https://codereview.appspot.com/7454044/diff/1/doc/effective_go.html#newcode217
doc/effective_go.html:217: <a href="http://golang.org/pkg/fmt/"><code>fmt</code>
package</a> shows this to good effect.
s/shows/uses/ ?

https://codereview.appspot.com/7454044/diff/1/doc/effective_go.html#newcode527
doc/effective_go.html:527: on multiple lines.  It's good (and
<code>gofmt</code>-mandated) style to do so anyway,
This addition only makes the message more confusing, IMO. The previous sentence
already says it's mandatory. What does gofmt have to do with it?

[r, 2013-03-01 00:50:05]

Hello golang-dev@googlegroups.com, adg@golang.org (cc:
golang-dev@googlegroups.com),

Please take another look.

[adg, 2013-03-01 00:54:28]

LGTM

[r, 2013-03-01 00:57:57]

*** Submitted as https://code.google.com/p/go/source/detail?r=12dda72d9932 ***

doc/effective_go.html: minor updates, part 1

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https://codereview.appspot.com/7454044